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Reply Fri 25 Mar, 2022 11:01 am
Is this sentence clear or is there a better choice:

Jane Doe will be your project manager, and she and I will be your main point of contact during the repairs.

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david lyga
 
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Reply Fri 25 Mar, 2022 11:03 am
@LBrinkmann,
I would opt for:
Jane Doe will be your project manager; she and I will be your main point of contact during the repairs.
LBrinkmann
 
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Reply Fri 25 Mar, 2022 11:18 am
@david lyga,
Thank you!
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Mame
 
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Reply Sun 27 Mar, 2022 09:25 pm
@LBrinkmann,
Well, I would say: she and I will be your main POINTS of contact (as there are two of you). Or, either she or I will be your main point of contact.
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