@tanguatlay,
tanguatlay wrote:
Despite having to face stiff penalties, however, many continued (and continue) to not wear rear seat belts.
Is "however" redundant?
Thanks.
I'll accept what has already been said about the "however."
However, the "to not wear rear seat belts" should be mentioned.
"To wear" is an infinitive. One can split it (interject a word between the "to" and the object verb), but in "formal writing" one should not do it.
This kind of writing is a form of formal writing.
The wording more properly should have been, "not to wear rear seat belts."