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Could "refer other agencies to work with you" replace the part in bold?

 
 
Reply Sat 27 Feb, 2021 02:47 pm
Depending on your work experience and background, our team may refer to other agencies to work with you to improve your chances of employability.

Could "refer other agencies to work with you" replace the part in bold? If so, why?

Thanks!
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tanguatlay
 
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Reply Sat 27 Feb, 2021 08:12 pm
Please help. Thanks!
izzythepush
 
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Reply Sun 28 Feb, 2021 08:05 am
@tanguatlay,
There is no part in bold.
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hightor
 
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Reply Sun 28 Feb, 2021 08:37 am
1. Depending on your work experience and background, our team may refer to other agencies to work with you to improve your chances of employability.

2. Depending on your work experience and background, our team may refer other agencies to work with you to improve your chances of employability.

I prefer #2 — I don't think that "refer to" is necessary because "to" is already there:

"our team may refer other agencies to work with you"





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tanguatlay
 
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Reply Sun 28 Feb, 2021 09:44 am
Many thanks, hightor!
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