Amendment of passage

If you are reporting direct speech you are saying what the person actually said. Unless ‘she’ is your own fictional character you have no place changing what was said.

Having said that spoken English is not as formal as written English and the first example sounds natural in conversation. If anything I would get rid of the ‘about’ at the end of the sentence.

Thanks, izzythepush.

I forgot it was direct speech. That's why I changed the wordings in some parts.

She said, "I have said everything that should have been said while keeping silent about everything else"