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Reply Tue 21 Jul, 2020 09:45 am
Which is clearer and a better choice:

Please let me know if you have any concerns about the punch list and when we can expect payment.
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Please let me know if you have any concerns about the punch list and also when we can expect payment.
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Sturgis
 
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Reply Tue 21 Jul, 2020 01:52 pm
@LBrinkmann,
The second is the better choice.

Ideally, I would make the two thoughts (punch list and payment), into separate sentences.

Please let me know if you have any concerns about the punch list. Further, when can we expect payment?
LBrinkmann
 
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Reply Tue 21 Jul, 2020 06:17 pm
@Sturgis,
Thank you!
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PUNKEY
 
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Reply Tue 21 Jul, 2020 08:14 pm
Please let me know when you have gone over the punch list and when we can expect payment for the job.
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