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Reply Tue 12 May, 2020 06:17 pm
The first is Muhyiddin’s demonstrated ability to hang onto power. This is no easy task. The man he replaced, Mahathir, has not stopped his campaign to pull Muhyiddin down to get his job back.

Would it be better if the last sentence were rephrased as follows?

"Mahahir, the man he replaced, has not stopped his campaign to pull Muhyiddin down to get his job back."?

Thanks.
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tanguatlay
 
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Reply Tue 12 May, 2020 08:18 pm
Could someone please help? Thanks.
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izzythepush
 
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Reply Wed 13 May, 2020 09:31 am
@tanguatlay,
I don’t think it makes any difference, but his name is spelled differently.
tanguatlay
 
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Reply Wed 13 May, 2020 09:52 am
@izzythepush,
Thanks, izzythepush.

It was a typo.
izzythepush
 
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Reply Wed 13 May, 2020 09:56 am
@tanguatlay,
We all make typos, I just wanted to let you know.
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PUNKEY
 
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Reply Wed 13 May, 2020 10:11 am
Just add to original sentence:



... down in order to get his job back.
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