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Reply Sat 11 Apr, 2020 06:56 pm
Is this sentence clear or is there a better choice:

She said the door should match the back patio door that is a Pella ThermaStar dual pane, energy efficient, and clear glass sliding door.
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roger
 
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Reply Sat 11 Apr, 2020 10:15 pm
@LBrinkmann,
Needs no improvement.
PUNKEY
 
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Reply Sun 12 Apr, 2020 08:26 am
@LBrinkmann,
The customer wants the door to match the back patio door - an energy efficient Pella ThermStar brand with dual paned clear glass.
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LBrinkmann
 
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Reply Sun 12 Apr, 2020 02:28 pm
@roger,
Thank you!
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