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Thu 5 Mar, 2020 01:36 pm
He (the Education Minister) added that moving forward, students can look forward to more educational trips to different countries in Asia, and even be encouraged to learn a third language should they show that they have an affinity for it.
Shouldn't it be "aptitude" instead?
Thanks.
Affinity is not incorrect--it just means a liking for, an attraction to something.
@tanguatlay,
I'd put a comma after "that." Also, two "forwards" close together isn't wrong, but it is awkward.
Also, I'd delete the comma after "Asia."