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Reply Wed 29 Jan, 2020 11:20 am
Which is a better choice:
We have been unable to contact you by phone to schedule the initial walk-through to discuss the repairs at your property.
or
We have been unable to contact you by phone to schedule the initial walk-through at your property to discuss the repairs.
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PUNKEY
 
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Reply Wed 29 Jan, 2020 12:28 pm
Are you discussing the repairs or the damages done, so you can determine what repairs will be needed?
LBrinkmann
 
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Reply Wed 29 Jan, 2020 12:31 pm
@PUNKEY,
Discussing the repairs due to damages.
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Sturgis
 
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Reply Wed 29 Jan, 2020 02:36 pm
@LBrinkmann,
The first sentence has a better flow.
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