Removal of comma

You know what — I think you can get rid of all the commas.

Thanks, hightor.

Do you mean all the three commas?

(I removed the "on" from "on working at" as well)

I think it reads quickly like this and doesn't really require commas. Sometimes adding every allowable comma makes for a stilted and broken quality in the sentence

Grammarly didn't have a problem with it.

Here we produce an excerpt from actor Adrian Pang's book "The Best Stage of My Life" which concerns his experience working at MediaCorp and how theatre has always been his first love.

Since an excerpt is technically a reproduction, I changed "reproduce" to "produce."

Many thanks to all of you!