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Reply Sun 14 Jul, 2019 01:05 pm
In doing so altogether / all together, we can achieve in reality what we do individually.

1. Should it be altogether or all together?
2. Should it be we can, in reality, achieve instead? If not, what is the correct phrasing?

Thanks.

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Reply Sun 14 Jul, 2019 01:10 pm
@tanguatlay,
All together


All together is used for doing things with other people.

Altogether is used for situations where something is done in its entirety.

I am unsure about the second part of your inquiry. Both seem to convey the same message.
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tanguatlay
 
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Reply Sun 14 Jul, 2019 01:19 pm
Thanks, Sturgis.

In doing so all together, we can, in reality, achieve more what we do individually.

I have tweaked the sentence. Does it make sense now? if not, please show me the correct phrasing?
Sturgis
 
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Reply Sun 14 Jul, 2019 01:28 pm
@tanguatlay,
Rewrite the sentence as: In doing so all together, we can in reality, achieve more than what we do individually.
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Reply Sun 14 Jul, 2019 03:08 pm
@Sturgis,
Thanks, Sturgis, for your time and effort.
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