I’m sorry that I cannot offer any help with the Latin; however, I must tell you that the English is quite problematic in that your imagery makes no sense. Sunflowers 🌻 🌻 are not described well as being clear. They can be better described as resplendent or vibrant.
Furthermore. You’ve opened things up with gaze but I’m unclear why and where you’re headed. Do you mean your view, perhaps? Likewise the imagery of the daisy is obscure. I’m unclear what is trying to be conveyed by this.
Translation of this prose verse might suffer until the English is cleared up. My aim is not to be critical but offer some sort of guidance to help the process.