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Reply Fri 19 Oct, 2018 06:09 am
Which is clearer:

Have you and your tenants had an opportunity to make the paint color selections? The project is currently on hold until we have received your color choices.

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Have you and your tenants had an opportunity to make the paint color selections? The project is currently on hold until we receive your color choices.
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InfraBlue
 
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Reply Sat 20 Oct, 2018 12:10 am
@dabbadabba,
The second one is better.
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Eian Mcneely
 
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Reply Mon 22 Oct, 2018 11:34 pm
@dabbadabba,
The second one works best in terms of clarity
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