Re: Wallbangers or Authors who need editors.
Green Witch wrote:Have you had the personal urge to go over a work with a red pen
Just yesterday, in a mini-way. It was just about the one sentence, actually - but it was exactly one of those wasnt-there-a-coreader-who-picked-up-on-this-and-said-dude-thats-redundant? thing. I'm reading Hullaballoo in the Guava Orchard, its very flowerish in language but still I like it - but this one sentence was just a metaphor too much, too awkward. Should have been struck away and made me wonder.
Oh **** I'm tired <blinks, peers>