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Reply Mon 13 Aug, 2018 01:19 pm
Is this sentence clear or is there a better way to state it:

I’ve attached a paid invoice for the deposit for the repairs at your home.
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InfraBlue
 
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Reply Mon 13 Aug, 2018 04:25 pm
@dabbadabba,
If the invoice is for everything including the paid deposit, then try, "I've attached an invoice with the paid deposit for the repairs to your home."
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Reply Mon 13 Aug, 2018 08:51 pm
I’ve attached an invoice showing the paid deposit for the repairs...

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