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Sun 28 Jan, 2018 11:46 pm
Six months pregnant Goh Chieh Ting was out for breakfast at Jurong West with her mother-in-law on 13 May last year. The pair had been about to cross the road to visit the market when Goh was hit by a lorry.
1. Should it be "Six-month pregnant" instead?
2. Should it be "were about to cross the road" instead?
Thanks.
Both locutions are correct, and do not need to be changed.
@tanguatlay,
big big no to your proposed change to 1.
2. fine the way it is but you could use your suggestion
@tanguatlay,
I'd put a comma after the modifying phrase, "six months pregnant."