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Thu 18 Jan, 2018 12:09 pm
The poem is structured as below:
I loved you then and I love you now,
Despite the odd ridiculous row.
And though there’s distance,
This is true,
My love is undying and carries through.
How would I go about structuring this in a straight-lined sentence (without the breaks)? I was thinking possibly like below:
I loved you then and I love you now, despite the odd ridiculous row. And though there’s distance, this is true; my love is undying and carries through.
Any help at all is very welcome - thank you in advance
@Carrieeee,
Quote:I loved you then and I love you now, despite the odd ridiculous row. And though there’s distance, this is true; my love is undying and carries through.
Looks good to me, except I would use a full colon, not a semi, after "true."
That's because of the word "this," which serves to indicate that what is going to follow is the "announcement" that "this" was referring to.
@Carrieeee,
Carl, after 'true' I'd'a used ':' 'steada ';'--like Lay sez
Maybe 'that' 'steada 'the'