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Tue 28 Nov, 2017 03:16 pm
Back to the earth,into the air ,human breath,above the street ,under the sunrises , a mind starts to move.
Best to follow a comma with a space.
@centrox,
What do you think about the sentence?
Sinister. And why 'sunrises' (plural)?
@centrox,
Because the sun is big and is good, so sunrises mean more good things.