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Reply Tue 28 Nov, 2017 03:16 pm
Back to the earth,into the air ,human breath,above the street ,under the sunrises , a mind starts to move.
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Reply Tue 28 Nov, 2017 03:22 pm
Best to follow a comma with a space.
itid
 
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Reply Thu 30 Nov, 2017 02:28 pm
@centrox,
What do you think about the sentence?
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centrox
 
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Reply Thu 30 Nov, 2017 04:00 pm
Sinister. And why 'sunrises' (plural)?
itid
 
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Reply Fri 1 Dec, 2017 08:02 am
@centrox,
Because the sun is big and is good, so sunrises mean more good things.
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