Could someone tell me if I have errors?

Here's my take on it:

...Diploma of Social Sciences (2002) from the Cegep of Thetford and a Bachelor of Geography degree (2005) from Universite Laval, both of which are in the Province of Québec. Additionally, I have a certificate in digital media production (2010), Edmonton Digital Arts College.

Additionally, I have completed a number of online certificate programs.

( it would be beneficial to you and the reader if you were to list these certificates)


*** move the sentence 'I am always looking to develop new skills...' to near the end of your letter.

Working for the CRA as a Business Agent, I performed data entry and responded to inquiries in both French and English.

While working as a Web/Graphic Designer at Freson, one of my duties, was keeping the filing up to date.

Move your skills to the next section as follows:
Working knowledge of Microsoft software, ability to query a database and narrow down information.

Languages spoken: French, English


***place your comments about looking to develop new skills here, try to be specific which area(s) you are seeking to learn more in.

Thank you!

Thank you, have a wonderful rest of your day!

Marie, hope others have come thru with additional paras

Having graduated with a Diploma of Social Sciences from the Cegep of Thetford in 2002, I also have achieved a Bachelor of Geography from Université Laval, completed in 2005, both schools located in Quebec. I also have a Certificate in Digital Media Production from Edmonton Digital Arts College, from which I had graduated in 2010. Always looking to develop new skills, I've subsequently completed a few 'online certificates'

Stur of course, always a god guy w/ good advice