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Losing You

Verse 1

I don't know how things got this bad
I just want you to remember all the things we've had
I shouted at you again today
I don't know what makes me act this way
All I feel is that I'm losing you at the fault of myself
I can't take this anger anymore

Chorus

and as I see you standing there
I'm lost without a care
cos I see that I still have you hanging on
and I know that its my fault
I ask you what do you want me to do
what do you want me to do

Verse 2

I know you're going through hard times
I just want you to be happy again
I feel I haven't helped you much
but I make my promise here and now
I will not shout about the bad times
we'll sort it out, we'll sort it out
and then hopefully we can be together in perfect unity

Chorus

and as I see you standing there
I'm lost without a care
cos I see that I still have you hanging on
and I know that its my fault
I ask you what do you want me to do
what do you want me to do.

Pre Chorus

and I realise I'm losing you
but I think that we could still be
I can't stand to argue show me the door
I really don't want to fight anymore

(this chorus repeated a second time)
and as I see you standing there
I'm lost without a care
cos I see that I still have you hanging on
and I know that its my fault
I ask you what do you want me to do