@watcanido4u,
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Dear
whom it may concern,
Find out exactly who to write to and use their name, if it is at all possible. Otherwise, just start the letter off with Re: Academic Readmission.
Please accept this letter as a
formal request to be reinstated in my formal study after two years of leave due to financial difficulties. My financial circumstance
s has have changed and I
am able to can make the minimum financial commitment of xxx amount as been suggested by the university.
I was enrolled in 2015, however, at the beginning of the term, I was faced with a difficult situation where my parents were under great financial hardship and continuing my study would have increased their burden. Two things have happened since I left school which overturned the situation and enabled me to raise enough resource to resume my study.
First, the main cause of the problem my parents were facing had been solved. At the time my parents were going through a legal dispute which had tied up their financial resources, but the case
had progressed favourably and they recovered from the financial loss.
New paragraph here, as you were talking about financial burdens, and now you have switched to talking about your assets. Also, where is the second problem? You mention only one problem here.
Another main source of the A new source for my school fund
ing came will come from my grandfather’s inheritance
, whom strongly .
He always wished
that I for me to complete my
studystudies. I will be adding Adding this amount to my personal savings, which I have been
saving accumulating since I left school by working as a freelance interpreter and translator
, it would. This will be sufficient to fulfil the minimum financial requirement. If reinstated, I am prepared to focus solely on academics.
I wrote to the department last year (2016) in early September requesting for reinstatement, however, time was not sufficient to complete the process before the start of the academic year and it was best to be postponed to current year. Don't refer to this unless they ask; it's irrelevant to your current request.
I am very happy that I am able Thank you for allowing me to apply for reinstatement to the register of Graduate Students. All of this would not have been possible without
God's grace andThis is utterly inappropriate unless you are writing to a religious school, and even then I would get rid of it. the kindness you and the university have shown me. I
seek appreciate your kind understanding and consideration of my application.
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Best of luck to you.
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