1
   

How to improve my writing?

 
 
Reply Tue 4 Apr, 2017 07:39 pm
How can I improve my creative writing? I am 20 years old. I honestly don't know where to start writing. In university, there are so many essays that I need to submit. However, what I would generally do is that I would copy and paste alot of the content online and paraphrase it through a generator online, or even use a thesaurus to assist me getting the words I can't figure out on the top of my head. I know that sounds very dumb but I honestly don't know how anyone can just sit and start writing/typing.

Nothing pops up in my head. I don't know how to just write like normal people can. I'm really nervous because I know throughout my university degree and even after uni, there will be many writing assessments that requires me to write. I desperately want to know how to start writing but not sure where to begin. Primarily speaking, I don't live in an under privileged area. I've got accessed to alot of materials that can help me. I have been told by one of teachers about my issues with writing - perhaps not about using a generator online bit, but due to the fact that I never know how to write. Her response and I'm sure many of you might say is "everyone knows how to write, everyone is creative in their own way...you just have to have a template or start dot points and then you get your rhythm".

I have heard it all before. My boyfriend suggested that I do alot of practice essay writing and get someone to correct it and give me feedback until I get better and better but my problem is that I don't know how to write without a thesaurus, or an online generator. I haven't told anyone that I am this horrible at writing, as I am very embarrassed. I feel like the only way I can get help is to ask online and on forums.

Please, if anyone has any suggests on what I can do to improve/develop my writing skill, don't hesitate to answer below. All suggestions are welcomed.
 
dalehileman
 
  -2  
Reply Tue 4 Apr, 2017 08:44 pm
@osmith20,
Hang in there Smitty. After 70 years in Journ I can assure you you're probly on the right track, as you seem to like the idea of bein' a writer My only adiv ce: Think, read, feel
0 Replies
 
saab
 
  4  
Reply Wed 5 Apr, 2017 12:02 am
@osmith20,
Not everybody knows how to write, sing, paint or run a maraton. Some of those who write, cannot write well.
Now with a thesaurus, computor and coping and pasting one does not have to think.
Forget these things and start writing a dairy. Put it away for a few hours or until the next day. Look at it and see if you use the same adjectiv too often.
The 5th of April the sun is shining. Try to describe the atmophere outside.
When you write e-mails. Stop writing with all kind of shortening and hi and smi lies. Write an email as a letter to people
If you lack fantasy - look around and write factual.
ossobucotemp
 
  1  
Reply Wed 5 Apr, 2017 12:12 am
@saab,
I could not agree more.
0 Replies
 
jespah
 
  4  
Reply Wed 5 Apr, 2017 04:35 am
@osmith20,
I am going to suggest two books to you.

1) Stephen King's On Writing
2) Ray Bradbury's Zen in the Art of Writing

Both authors give a few important pieces of advice. Their advice is similar, but you might respond to one author more than another. That's why I am suggesting both. Here's what they suggest, mixed with my own experiences and ideas, and I am talking about fiction writing but you'll see in a moment that it's a lot like essay writing:
  • Write about 2000 words per day as your goal. That's something like 5 pages single-spaced or 7, 7 1/2 with one and a half to double spacing. It depends on font size. For me, that takes anywhere from one to two hours.
  • Write every day. I would add, though, that exercising the writing muscle can be done with non-creative writing. So that means blogging, essays, etc. saab's idea of a diary is excellent. But spend time writing.
  • How do you do the first two? Set a calendar reminder and block off the time. Try to make a time when things are fairly quiet and you're not distracted by the siren song of social media. I personally like 2 - 4 PM or so for fiction writing, but if I have to work, I do put it off. Life intervenes and you have to make money; sobeit.
  • Don't worry if your first draft is horrible. Everybody's is.
  • Use writing prompts to get started. Just Google them.
  • Don't like the writing prompts you're finding? Then consider your favorite TV show or film. Ask yourself: what happened before the film (or series) started? What happened after the credits rolled? What happened to a certain side character? Don't knock fanfiction (for that's what I am suggesting is); lots of people get started that way.
  • Keep a writing jar filled with stream of consciousness ideas which don't have a home yet. Just park them in there, and withdraw from that bank (there's a mixed metaphor, eh?) when you've got writer's block.
  • Outline if that suits you. Personally, I am an outliner/plotter, but a lot of people (King, for example), write by the seat of their pants and don't really know what's going to happen until it gets onto a page. There's nothing wrong with that although those folks tend to need more editing later.
  • Read. A lot. Figure out how authors did something or other. How did they foreshadow? How did they make you keep turning the pages, and going from chapter to chapter? Did the mystery fall apart at the end? Did the ending satisfy you? Or not?

Now, to address essay writing directly. In high school, we were taught a four-step process.

1) Read the subject matter thoroughly and take notes. Research as necessary. Look up any words you don't know. Get your citation ducks lined up (if needed).
2) Outline what you are going to say. You got three points? Then they need to go in an order that makes some sense. Start with your strongest point first, and work your way down to the weakest one.
3) Write a first draft (kinda looks like what I wrote above, eh?). Never mind if it stinks; you're going to fix it in step 4.
4) Read over the draft and rearrange it if you need to. Consider the points you are making. Could you make them stronger? Did you write something convincing, or half-hearted? Would you be persuaded if you were reading this, and it wasn't your work? I have found reading aloud helps tremendously in this area. This step also means finishing your work, e. g. editing it and handing it in.

Put away the online generator; it's a form of cheating. The thesaurus is fine but if you are using it as a crutch then cut it out. I suspect it's more likely that you're using it as a procrastination tool. It looks like work, but it really isn't. Shades of meaning are important in your work, but that's what step #4 is all about. You seem to be using it for step #3. Don't.

I write for a living, both fiction and freelance blog and webpage writing. I have to get my writing engine going pretty much every single day. This is what has been working for me for years.

Best of luck to you.
0 Replies
 
saab
 
  3  
Reply Wed 5 Apr, 2017 06:49 am
Very good suggestions by Jespah, except I would say 2000 words a day is for too much.
It is a good amount for a writer, but certainly not for a beginner.
I would have suggested to start off with just a few lines, improve them, grammatically and the words.
A few more lines every day or even half page or a page. Alle depends on oneĀ“s mood and eager to wrtie.
Having a coal on how much I have to do - often makes you tired before you even start. Then you might not start at all.
jespah
 
  2  
Reply Wed 5 Apr, 2017 10:11 am
@saab,
Agreed; I think you're right that 2k is too much to start with. It might be best to do it as a timed event. E. g. whatever is written in 15 minutes is good and see where you go from there.

Oh, and 1 word is always better than 0 words.
0 Replies
 
dalehileman
 
  -1  
Reply Wed 5 Apr, 2017 11:29 am
@saab,
Quote:
Write an email as a letter to people
Saab, good'n. Don't write like Dale posts !
0 Replies
 
 

 
  1. Forums
  2. » How to improve my writing?
Copyright © 2025 MadLab, LLC :: Terms of Service :: Privacy Policy :: Page generated in 0.03 seconds on 01/13/2025 at 01:50:29