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Could anyone help me with this sentence please.

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Reply Wed 15 Feb, 2017 08:46 pm
I mean to say that the package is well-designed and suitable for the product inside, so the customer can easily pick it up and take it anywhere they want to put or use the product. Is this sentence correct or not? Or how should I say it if I want to say this sentence a little bit formal? Thanks!

Here is my sentence:
"A well-designed package go with the product can make sure the product can be easily taken to anywhere for on-site use."
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Reply Wed 15 Feb, 2017 10:18 pm
@hard2C,
Assuming the package or carrying case comes with the product, and is not a special case that must be bought separately, I would try this sentence:

The product comes with a well-designed case which ensures easy transport to wherever you need it.
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Reply Wed 15 Feb, 2017 11:35 pm
Sounds like you guys are discussing bananas and their skins. Colorful, clearly indicate the contents, protect said contents, and are easily removed.
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Reply Thu 16 Feb, 2017 02:00 pm
@hard2C,
Conveniently sheathed in sturdy and portable packaging , your new Gizmo is good to go, anywhere and anytime soon with youuuuuuuuuuuu.
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Reply Thu 16 Feb, 2017 10:26 pm
@Blickers,
Thank you, I think your sentence is very good, can I also re-write my sentence as below:
"Well-designed packaging for the product can ensure that the product can easily be taken anywhere for on-site use."
Is this also correct grammatically?
Blickers
 
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Reply Thu 16 Feb, 2017 10:36 pm
@hard2C,
I am almost ready to say that's very good, but there is an issue. In North American English, "packaging" normally refers to the disposable wrapper the product comes with. It's not meant to be kept and used as part of the product.

While "case" means a specially designed holder of the product that is meant to be kept and used as part of the product.
hard2C
 
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Reply Thu 16 Feb, 2017 11:29 pm
@Blickers,
Thank you for telling me the difference between "case" and "packaging", it's really helpful.
Thanks!
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