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Reply Thu 2 Feb, 2017 11:50 pm
Even though there are some people who have the capability to keep the memory for a long time, I think it is really difficult to find a person who can recall every memory since infancy.

1. Is the part in bold correct?
2. Are there any errors in the sentence?

Thanks.
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dalehileman
 
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Reply Fri 3 Feb, 2017 03:45 pm
@tanguatlay,
Tang I think it's okay though collo probly favors 'a' mem; while I might'a' said

Even though some retain certain memories for many years, I think you'll find rare the person who can recall every such memory since infancy

....though recent tv revelations have found a few who might qualify

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tanguatlay
 
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Reply Fri 3 Feb, 2017 09:19 pm
Thanks, Dalehileman.

Even though some retain certain memories for many years, I think you'll find rare the person who can recall every such memory since infancy.

I think I would write "...you'll rarely find a person..."

Is it worse or better?
roger
 
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Reply Fri 3 Feb, 2017 10:03 pm
@tanguatlay,
Better
tanguatlay
 
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Reply Fri 3 Feb, 2017 10:11 pm
@roger,
roger wrote:

Better
Thanks, roger.
tanguatlay
 
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Reply Sat 4 Feb, 2017 06:27 am
@tanguatlay,
Even though some retain certain memories for many years,

Would it be better to change the part in bold to long periods of time ?

Thanks.
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dalehileman
 
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Reply Sat 4 Feb, 2017 12:02 pm
@tanguatlay,
Quote:
...you'll rarely find a person..."..Is it worse or better?
Tang this morn I think you're right. I struggled with that'n'

Quote:
long periods of time ?
Golly Tang I'm conflicted here. However, considering my recent contributions all over the place, in my senescence I might be overdoing it

With the utmost encouragement however, I truly admire your persistence
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