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tanguatlay
 
Reply Sat 31 Dec, 2016 03:38 pm
Is the following sentence OK?

- I am self-motivated, I require little supervision, and I want to always continue learning.

Thanks.
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centrox
 
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Reply Sat 31 Dec, 2016 03:38 pm
It's fine.
tanguatlay
 
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Reply Sat 31 Dec, 2016 03:46 pm
@centrox,
centrox wrote:

It's fine.
Thank you.
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roger
 
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Reply Sat 31 Dec, 2016 03:59 pm
@tanguatlay,
I would have only used the word I once. Otherwise, it looks like three sentences separated by commas.
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dalehileman
 
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Reply Sat 31 Dec, 2016 05:55 pm
@tanguatlay,
Tang, the 'always' slightly redundant

And you could skip the last two 'I's'
Oops, Rog beat me to it
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