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How should the sentence be rephrased?

 
 
Reply Mon 19 Dec, 2016 11:10 am
The potential buyers of your flat are sincere and ready to commit with a good budget should your flat is suitable.

The writer is saying that the potential flat buyers are willing a high price should they find the flat suitable. But I don't think the sentence is OK.

How should the sentence be rephrased? Thanks.
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Reply Mon 19 Dec, 2016 11:52 am
@tanguatlay,
The potential buyers of your flat, Tang, are sincere and ready to commit with a good offer should your flat prove suitable to their purposes. However, I understand they intend to raise cats and dogs on that new carpet....
PUNKEY
 
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Reply Mon 19 Dec, 2016 12:55 pm
The potential buyers of your flat are sincere and ready to make a generous offer, subject to your flat being suitable.
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dalehileman
 
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Reply Mon 19 Dec, 2016 02:42 pm
@dalehileman,
I assure you, Tang, the potential buyers of your flat are sincere and ready to commit with a good generous offer should your flat it prove suitable to their purposes

Thanks, PUNK
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