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How are my lyrics (I'm really unsure)

 
 
Reply Wed 28 Sep, 2016 01:25 pm
[Verse 1]
One word said,
Then shatter like glass,
Flying through the air
But do they care?

Just stare one
Never gets noticed
Only gets used to
Keep them happy

[Chorus]
Life's a fragile thing,
Should never be messed with.
A single word,
Could destroy somebody's world,
Just like glass.

[Verse 2]
Pressure builds
Can't be handled so,
It comes crashing down.
Nothing left.

Once broken,
It cannot be fixed,
Without leaving scars.
Forever cracked.

[Chorus]

[Bridge]
Do you know?
That they don't show,
How broken they are
All their scars.

[Chorus]


I just want your honest opinion, I'm not too sure on the chorus. So if anyone has any suggestions please say and I will consider them :-)
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contrex
 
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Reply Wed 28 Sep, 2016 02:36 pm
It's a bit gloomy.
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loardeva
 
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Reply Mon 12 Dec, 2016 06:30 am
@Moonlight2442,
Not so lovely! Need more practice.
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