How are my lyrics (I'm really unsure)

Reply Wed 28 Sep, 2016 01:25 pm
[Verse 1]
One word said,
Then shatter like glass,
Flying through the air
But do they care?

Just stare one
Never gets noticed
Only gets used to
Keep them happy

Life's a fragile thing,
Should never be messed with.
A single word,
Could destroy somebody's world,
Just like glass.

[Verse 2]
Pressure builds
Can't be handled so,
It comes crashing down.
Nothing left.

Once broken,
It cannot be fixed,
Without leaving scars.
Forever cracked.


Do you know?
That they don't show,
How broken they are
All their scars.


I just want your honest opinion, I'm not too sure on the chorus. So if anyone has any suggestions please say and I will consider them :-)
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Reply Wed 28 Sep, 2016 02:36 pm
It's a bit gloomy.
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Reply Mon 12 Dec, 2016 06:30 am
Not so lovely! Need more practice.
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