Hello everybody, I'm looking for some help here since I'm writing a song in English (my native language is Spanish) but I think there is sentence that doesn't quite fit, I mean it fit in tempo with the song but I'm not completely sure it means what I want it to mean.
So, if anybody can help me I would be really grateful.
The sentence is:
- That’s why I will pack my stuff and leave behind all you represent.
Now, I know it would be more understandable like this: and leave behind all THAT you represent, but the word 'that' doesn't fit with the tempo, so, just like that, it is understandable or not?
Hartford had such a knack for making conversation lyrical and naturally so. I really miss him and his work. I enjoyed his participation in the "Brother Where Art Thou" concerts on PBS shortly before he passed.
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