in North America, the shoes would likely be called high tops
leisure shoes doesn't have a positive connotation
what she is wearing doesn't look like a dress - maybe a two piece or suit?
what are you trying to suggest when you say she looks refreshing?
first comma has to go
smiling lovingly? that doesn't make sense in the context of the photo
you've already discovered that spell able doesn't mean anything in English
on a New York street is better than in
in the street suggests she's been run over by a car