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Reply Thu 10 Dec, 2015 12:36 pm
Let me try it first (your editing opinion will be appreciated):
The girl, today appears in a New York street, looking refreshing and spell able, in her sapphire blue dress and a pair of white leisure shoes, smiling lovingly.
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Tes yeux noirs
 
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Reply Thu 10 Dec, 2015 02:05 pm
1. Lose the first comma
2. "Spell able" does not mean anything.

Tes yeux noirs
 
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Reply Thu 10 Dec, 2015 04:43 pm
She is wearing white trainers.
Smiling "lovingly"? She is just smiling.

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oristarA
 
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Reply Thu 10 Dec, 2015 10:22 pm
@Tes yeux noirs,
Tes yeux noirs wrote:

1. Lose the first comma
2. "Spell able" does not mean anything.




Whoa, I got trapped by online crappy writings:
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No matter you are full-time housewife or fashionable white-collar, can you love so spell able tableware ?
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If you want a spell able, strong feelings, then select a black stripes delicate dress suits, match on one of the high-end handbags, beige and female elegant demeanor supervisor.
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Office worker should prepare a sense of this kind of style to reach recreational the trousers that savours a beautiful, those who let you show duty field woman at any time is spell able with handsome.


Now I see how notoriously bad these writings are.
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ehBeth
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Reply Thu 10 Dec, 2015 10:29 pm
@oristarA,
in North America, the shoes would likely be called high tops

leisure shoes doesn't have a positive connotation

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what she is wearing doesn't look like a dress - maybe a two piece or suit?

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what are you trying to suggest when you say she looks refreshing?

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first comma has to go

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smiling lovingly? that doesn't make sense in the context of the photo

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you've already discovered that spell able doesn't mean anything in English

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on a New York street is better than in

in the street suggests she's been run over by a car
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ehBeth
 
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Reply Thu 10 Dec, 2015 10:30 pm
and - not connected to the writing - that outfit she's wearing looks very badly made and doesn't seem to fit her any better than the high tops do
oristarA
 
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Reply Thu 10 Dec, 2015 11:05 pm
@ehBeth,
Good comment, EB.
Would you like to depict it with your own words?
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ehBeth
 
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Reply Thu 10 Dec, 2015 11:10 pm
@oristarA,
A young woman recently seen on a New York street, happy and fresh-faced, but looking awkward in her poorly made blue outfit and white high tops.
oristarA
 
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Reply Fri 11 Dec, 2015 12:04 am
@ehBeth,
ehBeth wrote:

A young woman recently seen on a New York street, happy and fresh-faced, but looking awkward in her poorly made blue outfit and white high tops.


Smile Cool.
I like the expression "fresh-faced."
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