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I need help on my admission essay please
help me guys , cz i posted on the forum but
on one is replying ;(
Early childhood education is my proposed
field of study. This has been
influenced by my passion to work with
children who give me solace and peace
of mind. I am zealous to learn more about
children through early childhood
education which shall help me be well
prepared to work with the children
who are future generations.
I am particularly interested in specializing
with family childcare
specialization. My area of focus at work as a
social care volunteer has
made me realize that my purpose and calling
in life involves working with
children and bringing the best out of them.
Although working with children can be
challenging and stressful at times,
having a passion for them set one’s mind at
ease. Children need a strong
support system to improve their learning
and in sharpening their brains.
They have a potential of becoming
everything that they need to be hence I
have chosen to take this path to help them
in their endeavours.
As a result of my passion to work with and
help children I have decided to
volunteer at my community home based
care where I have also initiated an
after school programme with the main aim
of helping children that are
struggling at school. The difficulties in
learning could also be attributed
to failure to attend pre-school. I work
closely with local schools to help
children achieve more and perform better.
Participating in this Community College
Initiative would enhance my skills
in working with children and broaden my
knowledge. This program will give
me an opportunity to learn everything about
early childhood education, its
significance and understand the
relationship between education and cultural
diversity.