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Theist!! Why modern girls sell their nacke body in price of centis?

 
 
Inkpen
 
Reply Tue 25 Dec, 2012 08:06 am
Let me speak the truth with
plenty.
Even it is hate with majority.
west girls afraid
feeling empty. If they covers
thier beauty.
Is it,bcos she doesn't has
confidence on piety and
sincerity .
Why not they follow
dressing example of merry
sainty.
Plz todays girls feel guilty.
Do they need to pollute world
with being
nacked and chasty. Heal the
world
with covering ur beauty.
Plz don't afraid of being empty.
the power of mind is on
piety,sincerty, noblity. Not with
showing ur beauty.
This poem is my gift to sisters as
advice to do
their duety.
If u hate and spite me.i don't
care and take it in my acounting.
I need 2speak truth ,even if u
kick
me with ur long ugly booty
 
edgarblythe
 
  1  
Reply Tue 25 Dec, 2012 08:36 am
@Inkpen,
Long ugly booty? You are going to get some feedback, dude.
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jespah
 
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Reply Tue 25 Dec, 2012 09:12 am
This is the worst rap I've ever read.
edgarblythe
 
  4  
Reply Tue 25 Dec, 2012 09:14 am
@jespah,
Forgot the c in crap
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Lustig Andrei
 
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Reply Tue 25 Dec, 2012 02:24 pm
@jespah,
jespah wrote:

This is the worst rap I've ever read.


Oh, it's a rap.

I thought it was an agonized bout of verbal dysintery.
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Setanta
 
  1  
Reply Tue 25 Dec, 2012 02:29 pm
@jespah,
Hehehehehehehehehe . . .
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Inkpen
 
  0  
Reply Wed 26 Dec, 2012 08:52 am
I need to pass my message .if it was udestood, it is enough.
i don't mind if i get spite from negative poeple.
Ticomaya
 
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Reply Wed 26 Dec, 2012 08:56 am
@Inkpen,
Inkpen wrote:
I need to pass my message .if it was udestood, it is enough.

It is not enough.
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tsarstepan
 
  1  
Reply Wed 26 Dec, 2012 09:04 am
@Inkpen,
Inkpen wrote:

I need to pass my message .if it was udestood, it is enough.
i don't mind if i get spite from negative poeple.

If it was understood?! Clearly with the horrible grammar and inability to spell, maybe it wasn't understood by anyone not even yourself. If you truly understood what you were writing, you would have wrote it more succinct and clearly. Remember spell check is your friend.

First question: What the heck is a centis and how much does it cost in US dollars?

If you meant centos:
Quote:

cen·to
[sen-toh]
noun, plural cen·tos.
1. a piece of writing, especially a poem, composed wholly of quotations from the works of other authors.
2. anything composed of incongruous parts; conglomeration.
3. Obsolete . a patchwork.

Then at least your title would have a legitimate and truly unexpected deepness.
Properly translated and edited for better grammar, your question would be better worded as such:
Why would modern girls sell their naked bodies for the price of a poem?
Am I giving you too much literary credit and were you asking something less deep then that?
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maxdancona
 
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Reply Wed 26 Dec, 2012 09:08 am
@Inkpen,
You all are being a little hard on the kid. It has its good parts even though it is a bit preachy. I like the image of "nacked and chasty" women running around. And the play on words where someone is kicking him with their "booty" is a little clever...

I am sure there is worse out there somewhere.
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Inkpen
 
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Reply Wed 26 Dec, 2012 01:52 pm
Yes i know truth tasts bitter.pls take some water to pass it through your throat . Then u will understand it was nice preach. And english has no poem ends with the same letter. If u get may be i will be the 1st
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