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In need of the opening line

 
 
tycoon
 
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Reply Mon 13 Dec, 2010 09:52 am
" What would you have done with him? Make him squeal like a pig? These things always take time. You see, it's never been about you at all."

This has real possibility. One can't help but be drawn to the next paragraph.
Fido
 
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Reply Mon 13 Dec, 2010 11:16 am
@tycoon,
This is like the old riddle: How do you keep an idiot is suspense???
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