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i was walking down the empty city street
and then i seen you right beside me
looking at your hazel eyes
falling in love all over again

i wanted to tell you everything
but it never came out just to say
i miss you
and where were you this time

you were there when it was sunny
bright and happy along with it
i smiled all the time
when you tried to be funny

i wanted to tell you everything
but it never came out just to say
i miss you
and where were you this time

as it started to rain
i turned to you but you were gone
so i out my hands in my pockets
just like i do when i think about you

you make me love and hate you
trying to remember and forget
everything about you
and you don't even listen makes me wonder will you ever
'cause when things get hard
just to know that you still care

i wanted to tell you everything
but it never came out just to say
i miss you
and where were you this time

to say i've moved on
but you'll be with me, my shadow
everytime the suns with me
don't think i'll forget you
'cause i can't and i won't and i never will

i tell you everything
just to say it's over
but don't forget me

my shadow


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