Olympic Song revised for your opinion

ONE

From one root we humans grow
From one glorious sun seeds of fire glow
Hill upon hill, we live in one world as neighbours
Sea touching sea, we live on one planet as companions
One bliss, one tranquility, and one destiny
One peaceful world we commit to build
Among neighbours, swords cast aside, new friends we find
Among brethren, smiling we choose to leave hate behind
Folks of different colours, unite to paint one rainbow for the Sun
Folks of different tongues, unite to sing one song for this Land
Let one hope flock to the Bird's Nest to set doves to flight
Let one passion burst on the Great Wall with fanfares bright
We share one world and dream the same dream
One prayer rises from all over the world
We have one homeland and feel the same feelings
A world of harmony we create and share