Wed 13 Dec, 2006 06:12 pm - First class flight. Monique to the left, Jim and John and James to the right. Seat's too small, always too small, everything's too small.
Monique leafs through the Skymall, the boys... (view)
Sun 16 Jul, 2006 10:58 am - I dig it. Pretty good style, reminds me of someone I can't place. Wish you had taken it further though, feels like you were holding back a little. You've got a voice, but you... (view)
Fri 14 Jul, 2006 02:30 pm - Here is the start of a short story, I'd like some criticism, as brutal as you've got.
You might notice less than perfect grammar: most of that is deliberate. If something flat out... (view)
Sat 27 May, 2006 12:50 am - I really wanted to get some feedback on my writing. It's a new style for me, and I honestly don't know how good it is. Please, go ahead and be cruel.
There are also plenty of... (view)
