Member since May 10, 2003

mr trips

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mr trips
  • Answered Questions: 0
  • Posts: 39
  • Location: England
  • Occupation: freelance english teacher/writer
I and You

Fortunate am I that I have eyes to spy
On I and you and I.
And I will see as clear as me
The difference between
I and you and you and I.

And for why is why
As much as sky describes
The very ground on which
You and I and I with you
May walk and maybe talk
And walk and talk.
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Sun 18 May, 2003 04:11 pm - Thanks for that. I did find the themes of this one quite unnerving in some ways and the stark, precise style you've chosen is nicely appropriate - in my 'umble opinion, that is :) (view)
Sun 18 May, 2003 03:20 pm - Hi Once again, thank-you for your comments. The second poem is partly a joke about old-fashioned English cultural/racist stereotypes, partly a tired rant about cultural uncertainty in such a... (view)
Sun 18 May, 2003 07:26 am - Bigdice67: Sprechen ze deutch? (view)
Sun 18 May, 2003 07:25 am - Mushroom soup. Magic. (view)
Sun 18 May, 2003 07:04 am - BTW: Jack on the Box Fee fie foe fum! I smell the blood of an Englishman. Be he alive or be he dead, I'll grind his bones to make my bread. Giant brutes. Aboriginal cannibals.... (view)
Sun 18 May, 2003 06:52 am - BTW: I just this minute read your story again. Get it published. It's that good. (view)
Sun 18 May, 2003 06:44 am - I like what you say. It takes a sensitive person to realise the scale of the burden and responsibility of power. And that's what it is: power. The creature; the moment is just a symbol of that... (view)
Sun 18 May, 2003 06:25 am - Um. 'Mr trips' because it seemed like a bad idea at the time. It comes from 'The Stand' by one S. King. Nice bloke. Dreadful book. Dreadful. (It's the virus that wipes... (view)
Sun 18 May, 2003 06:09 am - Thank-you, thank-you, thank-you. (view)
Sun 18 May, 2003 06:01 am - gvapid: Mr trips writes: Being a large fan of lots of things, but especially Sci Fi, I think there's a book that you might know. And if you don't then in my arrogant onion, it's the... (view)
 
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