Sat 14 Jan, 2017 11:20 am - "are saying the same thing" "you have redundancy" "the sentence is over-written"
LOL, I see what you did there. Funny. (view)
Fri 6 Jan, 2017 11:20 pm - Sure. The following is more complete:
"Startled, I look over. Standing before me was the epitome of a tall, dark stranger indeed. He takes my hand and gives it a firm shake."
I... (view)
Thu 5 Jan, 2017 10:16 pm - My story is in 1st person, present tense, but I'm wondering if it is okay to throw in past tense for emphasis. Here's the sentence in question (remember, it's surrounded by... (view)
