Sat 24 Sep, 2022 04:37 am - So I ended up with this.
'Bella struck, snatching Bob from Frank’s shoulder.
“Mor`eth bin,” she screeched, as she bound Frank, her gnarled fingers snipping at his neck.... (view)
Thu 22 Sep, 2022 08:45 am - Hi All, many thanks for the replies, very much appreciated, and got me thinking more about the wording. I guess I missed out a couple of important elements in my opening post.
The witch does... (view)
Mon 19 Sep, 2022 01:18 am - Hi again.
This time I am trying to decide if it is clear in the sentence below, who is being affected by which action, or if it needs to be re-worded.
'The witch struck, snatching Bob from... (view)