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Word Choice/Punctuation

 
 
Reply Fri 9 May, 2025 08:44 am
Is this sentence clear or is there a better choice, and is the punctuation correct?

Please process the invoice with job number 3110078805 instead of 3110557023; a revised invoice is attached.
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Reply Fri 9 May, 2025 11:34 am
@LBrinkmann,
There's nothing wrong with it, but I would slightly reword the second part.

Please process the invoice with job number 3110078805 instead of 3110557023, as per attached revised invoice.
LBrinkmann
 
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Reply Fri 9 May, 2025 11:38 am
@izzythepush,
Great, thank you!
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