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Mon 20 Jan, 2025 11:36 pm
I’m still working on it but here’s a preview! What does everyone think about them?
Burn our hearts with all the fights that we’ve had, we can’t seem to be able to say good bye
Wipe our tears with the memories. cause they were all too good to turn our backs
No one understands the love we have
no one understands that this is the love we made
I just can’t imagine my life without you
So I hope we can mend things
Mend the things that we’ve broke
Mend the words that we’ve said
We don’t always get along but we always have each others backs.
Those people don’t know
We’ve been through so much to throw it all away
Burn our hearts with the fights that we’ve had
Wipe our tears with the memories
@Sidney,
I would continue to edit it.
@edgarblythe,
Okay ! Does it sound good so far or should I switch things up?
Readers can't discern your music. To me it reads more than it sings.
@edgarblythe,
edgarblythe wrote:
Readers can't discern your music. To me it reads more than it sings.
Don't be afraid to tear it to pieces and start all over. If that fails you still have the original to work on.
@Sidney,
The metre, foot and rhyme requires attention.
I especially enjoyed "wipe our tears with the memories".
https://www.soundtrap.com/content/blog/how-to-write-song-lyrics?msockid=138c36749dcd633b39dd23089cc8625f
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