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Reply Wed 7 Aug, 2024 09:27 am
Is this sentence clear or should 'need' be 'needs' and should 'that' be omitted?

We are the general contractor who will be completing the repairs and need access to the portal so that we can download the documents.
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Region Philbis
 
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Reply Wed 7 Aug, 2024 09:32 am
@LBrinkmann,

i think this is better --

As General Contractor, we will complete the repairs and will need access to the documents on the portal.
Mame
 
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Reply Wed 7 Aug, 2024 10:29 am
@LBrinkmann,
Agree with RP; alternatively:

As the general repair contractor, we need access to the portal in order to download the documents.
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LBrinkmann
 
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Reply Wed 7 Aug, 2024 01:01 pm
Thank you both!
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Ragman
 
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Reply Thu 8 Aug, 2024 06:44 am
@Region Philbis,
Well done both of you.
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