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Reply Thu 4 Jan, 2024 03:24 pm
Is this sentence clear or is there a better choice:

We originally thought these units sustained water damage but found that they hadn’t and didn’t complete any demo or work in either unit.
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Reply Fri 5 Jan, 2024 01:20 pm
@LBrinkmann,
We originally thought these units sustained water damage but found that they hadn’t and therefore didn’t complete any demo or work in either unit.

I don't think you need the underlined bit. It's obvious no work was done if none were needed, right?
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