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Reply Tue 2 Jan, 2024 11:05 am
Which sentence is a better choice:

We would like to get you onboarded in our system and require the attached paperwork to get you set up and approved.

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We would like to get you onboarded in our system, and we require the attached paperwork to get you set up and approved.
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Reply Tue 2 Jan, 2024 11:42 am
@LBrinkmann,
Please complete and return the attached paperwork so we can enter you into our system.
LBrinkmann
 
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Reply Tue 2 Jan, 2024 02:12 pm
@Mame,
Thank you and Happy New Year!
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