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Reply Thu 19 Oct, 2023 11:45 am
Are these sentences clear or is there a better choice:

This job is ready to be final invoiced, and Brad will be meeting with the customer for the final walk-through. Please send the invoice to me, and Brad will provide it to the customer and collect payment.
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Reply Thu 19 Oct, 2023 11:56 am
@LBrinkmann,
This job is ready for its final invoice to be generated. Please send it to me and I will pass it to Brad who will hand it to the customer when they meet for the final walk-through. He can then collect payment.
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Reply Thu 19 Oct, 2023 12:43 pm
Thank you!
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Reply Fri 20 Oct, 2023 02:51 am
@LBrinkmann,
Brad will be meeting with the customer on date, please provide the invoice so he can complete the final walkthrough.

Try to use as few words as possible.

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