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Reply Tue 27 Sep, 2022 10:11 am
Which is clearer and a better choice:

Attached is another fully executed sub agreement that I uploaded that’s ready to be interfaced.
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Attached is another fully executed sub agreement that I uploaded and it's ready to be interfaced.
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Reply Tue 27 Sep, 2022 10:47 am
@LBrinkmann,
Two things:

What is the purpose of "that I uploaded" in this sentence?

Attached is another fully executed sub-agreement that's ready to be interfaced.

I also don't understand "that's ready to be interfaced."

If it's "fully executed" (whatever that means), doesn't that imply it's ready to be interfaced?
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Reply Wed 28 Sep, 2022 09:46 am
@Mame,
"That I uploaded" and "that's ready to be interfaced" are interoffice phrases. I wanted advise on whether "that's ready" or "and it's ready" was the better choice, but made that as unclear as my two example sentences! Lol Thanks Mame!
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