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Is this sentence clear or is there a better choice:

We need to get plans for basement code upgrades for this project that you previously provided plans for.

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@LBrinkmann,

That's a convoluted sentence.

We need updated codes for that basement project you'd earlier provided plans for.

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@Mame,

It definitely is! Thank you!

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@LBrinkmann,

How many basement projects has this party provided plans for?

If it's just this one you can cut out, "you'd earlier provided plans for," and make it even simpler.

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