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Reply Mon 28 Mar, 2022 09:03 am
Is this sentence clear or is there a better choice:

We need to get plans for basement code upgrades for this project that you previously provided plans for.
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Mame
 
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Reply Mon 28 Mar, 2022 09:43 am
@LBrinkmann,
That's a convoluted sentence.

We need updated codes for that basement project you'd earlier provided plans for.
LBrinkmann
 
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Reply Mon 28 Mar, 2022 09:58 am
@Mame,
It definitely is! Thank you!
izzythepush
 
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Reply Mon 28 Mar, 2022 10:49 am
@LBrinkmann,
How many basement projects has this party provided plans for?

If it's just this one you can cut out, "you'd earlier provided plans for," and make it even simpler.
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