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Reply Tue 23 Nov, 2021 01:21 pm
Which sentence, or neither, is clearer and a better choice?

I’ve attached a scope of work for our project that drawings are needed for the permit and repairs.

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I’ve attached a scope of work for our project in which drawings are needed for the permit and repairs.
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Reply Tue 23 Nov, 2021 02:34 pm
@LBrinkmann,
I'd go for the second one.
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Reply Wed 24 Nov, 2021 09:08 pm
@Mame,
Thank you!
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