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Reply Thu 30 Sep, 2021 09:00 am
Is this sentence clear or is there a better choice:

We contacted the insured and scheduled the project manager to meet with him tomorrow to discuss the painting schedule.
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Mame
 
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Reply Thu 30 Sep, 2021 09:15 am
@LBrinkmann,
I would probably say:

We've scheduled the project manager to meet with the insured tomorrow...
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LBrinkmann
 
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Reply Thu 30 Sep, 2021 09:54 am
Thank you!
Mame
 
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Reply Thu 30 Sep, 2021 10:10 am
@LBrinkmann,
You're welcome! You could also say:

The painting contractor and insured are meeting tomorrow...
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Seizan
 
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Reply Thu 30 Sep, 2021 06:49 pm
@LBrinkmann,
"We contacted the insured and scheduled the project manager to meet with him tomorrow to discuss the painting schedule."

Could become

We arranged a meeting for tomorrow between the insured and the project manager to discuss the painting schedule.

(Obviously if you arranged a meeting, you must have contacted both the insured and the project manager.)
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izzythepush
 
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Reply Fri 1 Oct, 2021 12:47 pm
Mame's is best, less is more, 8 words to Seizan's 18.
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