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What should the grammar be in these two sentences?

 
 
Reply Fri 6 Aug, 2021 03:04 pm
Is the grammar in these sentences correct? I can't work out if it should be a semi-colon, full stop or comma (or maybe colon?)

"The lady’s slipper orchid attracts attention because it’s beautiful and rare. Yet this is its biggest downfall; it’s rare because it is so beautiful."
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Reply Fri 6 Aug, 2021 03:10 pm
"The lady’s slipper orchid attracts attention because it’s beautiful and rare. Yet this is its biggest downfall; it’s rare because it is so beautiful."

I would write it this way:

...rare, yet this...

Sentences have to be complete and they aren't supposed to start with conjunctions, i.e. but, however, therefore, yet...

Here's a good site for you.

https://www.skillsyouneed.com/write/punctuation1.html
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Reply Fri 6 Aug, 2021 04:37 pm
@Mame,
Ok, thank you. But the semi-colon is correctly used?
Mame
 
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Reply Fri 6 Aug, 2021 05:05 pm
@frog and goose 6,
Yes, perfectly correct, and you are more than welcome! Welcome to the English language Smile I'd say you were doing pretty well.
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