language proof reading

Reply Wed 28 Jul, 2021 11:57 pm
can anyone help me read through the following words, see if they sound ok. thank you. waiting online

September, the ninth month of the year, mid-autumn is here
2021, ninth anniversary of our family, you are still with me, dear
Looking back on our journey together, there is nothing I want to do but cheer
Mid-autumn, a holiday for family reunion and blessings
Mooncakes, especially made for you with sweet feelings
Now is our harvest season with oranges ripe into gold
Colorful memories of our past journey shine light into our future road
Moonlight murmurs our first wishes, that never changes over time
Our effort and endeavor pay off, bringing us a big harvest-time
Wish you a happy family reunion
May our journey of success continue in the future
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